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Friday, 24 May 2019

Ramadan slide. By Isabella & christina

27 comments:

  1. Kia ora Isabella.
    I am glad to see that you have been learning about Ramadan. Did you do anything else to celebrate it? Maybe next time, you could add more information about each question you have asked in your slide.

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  2. hi its ethan i i like howu were telling as about it was cool i have a blog post on my blog to hope you day bye.

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  3. Kia Ora Isabelle it is Trinity Here,

    Hey Isabella it is Trinity I like your blog post about Ramadan I like how you are learning about Ramadan.

    Blog you later.

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  4. Kia Ora Bestie Christina here.

    I like how you put much information about it so i can learn About Ramadan. its so cool of about the background and the beginning of its so cool. #AWESOME~Christina

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  5. Hi Im Aria I really like how you put lots of effort into your slide next time maybe information onto the slides and make the font biger

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  6. I like it lsabella

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  7. Talofa,Isabella I like how you made it because I didn't hear into the website cool you made it on your own.

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  8. i like it isabella from amira.

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  9. Hi Isabella its Ashton.i like how you mentioned Christina.I didn't now that it was on the ninth month

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  10. Hello Isabella thanks for teaching me about ramadan from Orlando

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  11. Talofa Lava Isabella, Acasia here
    This is a great thing to put on your blog. I like how you have put the question first and then the answer thats a cool idea! Maybe next time you could you could have added more information about it? Overall I like it.

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  12. Hey Isabella its Kaycees from your class.
    I liked the way you put this on your blog I really like reading your posts you put on.Blog you later. Bye

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  13. Hi its brodie here i like the way you did 5 facts about ramadan. Did you think about putting fullstops.Why did you put this on your blog? bye.

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  14. Hola it's Riley! i like this but could add facts or make the descriptions longer! i we have more to learn about ramadan! anyway this is cool i have a question for you what happens if someone does not do ramadan! anyway i have bye! keep making cool slides!

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  15. kia ora its nikau.i like ur animation and the background.how did u get all of those facts.did u think about making the words bigger so we can read it

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  16. Hi isabella its me Addison I like how you did five facts about ramadan maybe next time you could change the background each slide and that's all I have to say Bye.

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  17. Hi its connor here i like the way you did 5 facts about ramadan. Did you think about putting full stops .Why did you put this on your blog? bye.

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  18. hi its micah i like your photo its so cool like your ides

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  19. Hi Isabella,
    it's me Bea i really like your post and it's really cool!

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  20. Hi its Kirsty here i like the way you did 5 facts about ramadan. Did you think about putting full stops, if Miss waho saw this she would be correcting you straight away. why did you make a slide? Bye.

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  21. Kia Ora Isabella, I loved the title page, it was very creative, I also thought to transitions were pretty good, maybe add some more punctuation, to make people understand it more better? Maybe add an introduction for the slide, I hope this comment seems helpful for you to understand.

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  22. Kia ora Isabella its Ethan H I like you post it is nice and styled
    My favourite part was fact 3 because they can't drink till 24 more hours?! what? Maybe next time add some pictures to make it more interesting. Bye

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  23. Hey Isabella!
    This is a good blog post! Next time you could put longer facts, or put more facts. But this is amazing! Keep up the good work!

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  24. well that is cool good jod

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  25. Kia Ora Isabella,
    you have made a beautiful slide and it looks amazing. This took me back to when I was learning about ramadan. Maybe next time add a introduction and a next step but still a great blog post.
    Blog You Later.

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  26. Kia ora Isabella,
    You have done very well on this, I didn't know that people who celebrate ramadan don't eat on that day, it's very interesting.
    What would you want to do next?
    Maybe next time you could add more description on this post, and why you did it.

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  27. Hey Isabella!
    This is great! Next time you could add more facts. But other than that this is good!

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