hi isabella its dylan from gilberthorpe school me and hunter both thoughy it was about him but then we found out it isint hey and also next time do it on a doc not a slide anyway
Malo e Lelei Isabella really good poem at first I thought it was about hunter when I looked at it then I read it and it was awesome it was so positive and thoughtful. and all of it is positive it is so long and it is one of the best poem's i've ever read. Blog ya later!!!!
Hi Isabella it's Chrysler from whakamanawa I like the way that you wrote about one of your family members.One thing that you might need to add is who is hunter.how did you know to post a doc on your blog when you are eight years old. BLOG YOU LATER Chrysler
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hi isabella its dylan from gilberthorpe school me and hunter both thoughy it was about him but then we found out it isint hey and also next time do it on a doc not a slide anyway
ReplyDeleteblog u later
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nice comment dylan
Deleteit was on a doc not a slide!!!
DeleteMalo e Lelei Isabella
ReplyDeletereally good poem at first I thought it was about hunter when I looked at it then I read it and it was awesome it was so positive and thoughtful. and all of it is positive it is so long and it is one of the best poem's i've ever read. Blog ya later!!!!
Hi Isabella it's Chrysler from whakamanawa I like the way that you wrote about one of your family members.One thing that you might need to add is who is hunter.how did you know to post a doc on your blog when you are eight years old.
ReplyDeleteBLOG YOU LATER Chrysler